1) I will improve on tying up my statements, by going to the writing center to ask for advice.
2) I need to improve on making my evidence more extensive, I will do this by doing more research.
3) I will need to improve on clarity of the intro, I will do this by making it more in depth.
4) I will need to fix all grammatical errors throughout the essay, I will do this by going to the Writers Block.
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